![]() Talia Fortune's uncle is in charge of running the off-world Fresh Havens, but he's no longer a competent manager. I would not completely close the door on reading something else from this author because I think there's potential, but I'd prefer a tighter plot next time.Ĭorporations own colonies in Michele Lang's fabulously futuristic Netherwood. So in the end this became an average to below average read to me rather than a good read. There were some interesting ideas in there, I just wish there was less. Despite a couple of typos (FourtuneCorp, fingr), it flowed well (it was a first person past tense point of view in case people wanted to know). What that didn't make this book a complete failure for me was that the writing itself was okay. Talia going from a gung-ho, confident young thing, to realizing she doesn't know it all, to martyr annoyed me. Kovner's zen know-it-all attitude and smiles in spite of bad news was annoying. On top of that - while the hero and heroine were interesting, they began to annoy me. ![]() Everything sort of sounded cool and interesting but were so vague that my suspension of disbelief wouldn't stay suspended. ![]() There were too many ideas going on which weren't very well thought out. I really liked the premise but the execution did not work. ![]()
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